Hello I am from and I am here to give you the critique that you requested thanks for your patients and I wish this help you in the end and remember all critiques are subjective.
Positives- I do really like the concept of the piece I like the vertical composition and how everything looks like it is going converging up like having it wider in the bottom like with the horses coming out of the dress and that the dresses is wider at the bottom really helps the eyes move easily and the attention stays at her face and the focal point is noticeable. So I think the placement of the elements in the piece is very strong and I think you have improved so much with your placement of your elements and having a stronger composition.
I think the texture looks great in your artwork, you have amazing signature texture and I think you adding the texture and making it prominent in the piece compliments the model a lot and also the horses it look very classic and sort of old world like. The textures with the model emphasize the feeling that she look like a goddess of wrath and anger. The elements of this piece look great and their placement is what makes the piece so beautiful.
Suggestions- This piece has a good composition and it looks great far away but when you look up close it doesn't look as strong and I think because some of the stock look a little blurry or soft around the edges like the antlers and the the model but the horses have sharper edges so I think maybe to make the edges a little sharper and show the texture of the hair more and also maybe taking away the dark outline look around the arms because it is a little distracting so doing these things can help to unify the composition a little and also make it look great up close to.
I think the desaturated pink works well with the artwork because it is easy on the eyes and something like red is usually the idea that makes us think anger or rage in our mind but it is very saturated so I think the fact you went with something soft helped and did not overwhelm the piece, but it also stands out and adds to the mood and theme of anger and wrath and worked beautifully.
I hope this helped you out and please let us know if you need anything else.