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Hello it is me again and as you know I am from and I am here to provide you with a hopefully helpful critique, I will be 100% honest and remember all critiques are subjective and I hope this helps you in the end.

Okay to start this is a very beautiful piece like all the works in your gallery and I love the artistry and how original your style is to you and you alone. I love the concept of the piece I really love the beautiful monochrome color scheme it is just stunning and it works incredibly well with this beautiful piece. I love how the piece has such a lot of emotion very surreal, I just admire how you are able to convey such a scenery mood. The lighting is lovely and what I think what makes piece such a masterpiece is it is so atmospheric. I love the rhythm of the clouds and the way you position them works really well for the piece, I also think you have the lighting is a equally lovely location.

I also like how you have the gray mixed in with the purples and pinks, it adds a lot of dimension into the piece and having to much of the purples and pinks would make the piece almost a eye sore, so you decisions to add the grays was a great one, and it adds good contrast. I like the fact that the water is not to much and the bath tub is not to much, it all blends in with the background very well. One thing I admire about your pieces are the use of textures you use in your art. It works great because it is never to much a common mistake with artist is they add to much textures to a piece at times and sometimes it becomes overwhelming, but you add just enough that it doesn't take away from thew beauty of your work, so good job.

Okay my suggestions, I do love the lighting in the piece it is very soft and I like how you decided to go bright or with a lot of light, a mistake artist make at times is they try to make an art piece both have the same amount of light and shadows and in real life that is never true a object either has lots of light on it or is dark and has more shadows, so your lighting is good. But my suggestion, is I would of like to see maybe around the legs like more light striking it from the side on the left leg because to me it seems the most light comes from the side and the other source from the front, so I say for next time if you have 2 light source which is tricky for any artist is just to pick one that will be brighter than the other, it helps add the the composition and makes it easier on you when your creating your art, is to add one 1st then another

Okay my other suggestion, is just the value, I love how she blends with the background it is beautiful but I would of like to see the roses have a little more contrast to her hair so they can pop out more like her eyes do the arms are really light but I think that works great with the pieces feel, also maybe try playing around with the fish's value because I did know it was in her hand until I saw the stocks you referenced. So the fish is a little hard to see. So I suggest you can play around with the value, like maybe make it darker so it will be noticeable just to have it at a shade where you can see more clearly so it can contrast with the lovely young lady.

Those are my suggestions you did a fantastic job and this is just a breathtaking work of art. My suggestions are just a few is to just work with a little contrast so some areas become more clear, and also just making one light source more dominate than the other. I hope this helped you out for future pieces and keep submitting your beautiful pieces and if this helped then please feel free to suggest us to other artist thank you for your patients and have a great day

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